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Topic: *Specific Serial Killer*

15 bars max

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due in 3 hours

medal on the line

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 3:26pm \| IP Logged

ok <- get ready to see that backwards.

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VOTING CATS

Flow
Topic
Emotion
Imagery
Originality

Edited by OnlyOne on 14 April 2012 at 4:25pm

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Line for Line Keystyle Style

Ted Bundy

He once called himself "..the most cold-hearted son of a bitch you'll ever meet."

In his 68 voltswagon, he'd choose victims and cruise eerily
Imagine taking more 'lifes' than complete 'years' you'll see

He suffered a blackwhole which consumed any guilt or remorse
His charming lies caught their eyes as some sort of Romeo magic
His brutal cravings of mutilation were congested as Tokyo traffic

Borderline sociopathic, how can one be so intellectual with agony?
Did he collect this trail of tragedy, disconnect his self-reality?
Ted himself was blasphemy, could his depth foretell the casualties?

At his deathbed, actuality was all that was left to tell the families
His demise applauded on site, cause he didn't repel his fantasies
The most sickening fact was he accelled in sanity in his hotel calamities

^^^^^^^^^^

Now, his crimes, and their inhumanity.

Due to his actions he found sex and death as a new attraction
Decomposing bodies as hobbies, being cockblocked by putrefaction
'DEATH' as a 'Life accomplishment'.. infatuated, he tricks 'em
In at least half the cases he decapitated his victims
Before proceeding to add make-up but this was the real picture
The real picture so he'd decorate once-beating hearts as still fixtures
With the ability to rape a dying aids patient and still not feel sicker
Solidification of corpses, give substance to her name- crystal
Never shot a gun once, while most kill with the same pistol
Without looking in their eyes promising to remove their sockets,
Before raping their open skull and putting them in his pocket
see the process of their faces & tits takin' off like a rocket

i'm gonna stop it.

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:26pm \| IP Logged

You call me out for a short time battle then NO SHOW ?!?

Bitch, you got exactly an hour after the time i see you on the online users list again.

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I Got Half Done 2 Hours Extension Plz

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My Lil Girl Used The Bathroom And It Got All Over Her Had To
Give Her a Bath Feed Her And Lay Her Down

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2 hours no more, mods... do a C@SH M0NK3Y and clean this thread up!

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C@SH_M0NK3Y 19:45
!@#!in DQ ME Dude I Lost All My !@#!

I have no reason in the world to think you're makin excuses so i'll be generous and give you until 6 tomorrow. that's 22 hours and 12 minutes, restart your almighty process.

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Rodrigues Filho

IT All Started With a Beat To The Skull In His
Mother's
Womb He Grew Up Ready To Kill Only To Let Him Reap
What
He Sewed ''His Father''

They Called Him Pedrinho Metador Aka Lil
Peter The Killer Mudered Many From Family To Prison
Inmates And Even Drug Dealers

He Started To Kill When He Was Thirteen And
Tryed
To Off His Cousin By Pushing Em Into a Sugarcane Press It
Was Close But The Lil Boy Only Neared Death

Next He Murderded a Mayor for Terminating
His Father After Finding Out He Was Stealing From The
Kitchen He Ended Up Murdering Another Man The One Who
Really Did It

At The Age Of 18 He Left A Trail
With a 10 Body Murder Count On the The Path To Seek
Vengeance On His Father Out Slashed N Slashed Em Wit a
Machete He Even Ripped and Ate His Heart Out

He Was Was Arrested In 73' Only To Turn Into A
Animal And Run Through Killing Them All 47 Victims Behind
Bars Setenced 127 Years But Released In 07' Due To a
Fucked Up Brazilian Law

Claims He Killed 350 or More But Made a
Deal On 71 Only To Become A Killing Whore a Contract
Killer Killing Criminals And Drug Lords He Even Put
Francisco Pereira Aka The Park Maniac In The Morgue
Now Imagine Growing Up Knowing Nothing But Murder
All From a Head Injury That Crushed Your Skull While You
Were Living In Your Mother To Grow Addicted To Killing So
Many
When You Werent Offing Someone You Were In Sweats
Thinking Of Your Next Victim To Be So Cold Hearted That
You Laugh When You Hit Em

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:23pm \| IP Logged

Flow
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Originality

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i think cash told a story better his shit was by far more interesting. chad was askin too many ?'s and that fucked it up for me but im voting to the cats so...

flow-chad

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emotion-chad(easy)

imagery-tied

originality-cash(easy u dont hear about rodriguez filho everyday)

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LOL

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Flow - OO
Topic - Cash
Emotion - Cash
Imagery - OO
Originality - Cash

cash gmv

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Oh did this hurt ? Lmaooo fuckin A

Quote: OnlyOne

Personals - Para

all other cats eXpL. this battle was so 1 sided I lost grip of 3 demensional reality.

okay that was a little of a stretch, unlike eXpL's bars.. they were a huge stretch.... Much like Para's weird ass acronym deal. Like if anybody was to HEAR that verse by someone reading it to them, they would be sceptical to the fact that they were real sentences.. and none of the words for the letter "X" actually begins with the letter "X" thus adding to the vast usage of vocabulary, a true example of the word; oxymoron.

Edited by OnlyOne on 22 April 2012 at 7:01pm

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hahahhahahaha.... no it didnt hurt, well, maybe a little.... but I voted on cats straight up this wasn't a hate vote against you. Your clearly better than cash and if the cats had been the same as any other normal text battle you would have taken it. Not sure how punches or personals would fit in here but nevertheless my vote is for cash... thus highlighting the problem that usually occurs on BC because of an imperfect voting structure based solely on 5 cats yet no one cares enough to fix it so fuck it.

Edited by ParasiticRuffian on 23 April 2012 at 1:40am

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Flow-Only1
Topic-Cash
Emotion-Cash
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Originality-Cash (i didnt kno who rodriguez filho was till now)

thats how i saw it Cash gmv

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Flow - Onlyone displayed a nice flow; even though his spelling fucked me up at times; Cash I stumbled at point on your joint; so i had to go with ONLY

Topic - All both did the same topic; but CASHES was someone you don't hear of very often; so CASH took this

Emotion - Onlyone was from a a 3rd persons perspective as was cashes sop it was hard to catch a grasp on your EMOTIONS in the drop; cuz your just assuming how people felt; i'm sure they felt like that but there must have been other feelings and thoughts with it; TIED

Imagery - Imma go with ONLY on this cat; he painted some vivid imagery from his point of view; Cash did as well; just i felt Only was stronger

Originality - Mos def CASH; just for the person he chose

Now when i break it down; I got a tie; this battle was a lot closer than people are making it out to be; I see or sense some fishy shit; over I'm give it to cash; For the simple fact of the person he chose to due his topical on; not taking anything away from ONLY his shit was mad nice; just i felt story telling wise cash covered more details! Good battle VOTE: CASH

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 10:54pm \| IP Logged

no tied cats
25 + posts to vote
1 closed battle

^ standard voting rules

also if you don't understand the categories

Flow - obvious, which reads better, not too stretched, structure is key
Topic - this is not based on the TOPIC, it's what the writer did with the topic
Emotion - the anger, sadness, callousness, ability to get inside the mind of the person
Imagery - images described, metaphors and smilies can be key to portraying a picture
Originality- based off the SUBSTANCE not the topic

Edited by OnlyOne on 26 April 2012 at 10:58pm

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 11:36pm \| IP Logged

im changing my vote ive made a mistake

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i think onlyone was much more complex but not as original where as cash monkey was a lot more out of the box though lacking originiality

flow-cash

topic-chad

emotion-cash(easy)

imagery-chad(effortlessly)

originality-tied

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cash monkey - 2 votes, onlyone - 0 votes, nobody - 2 votes

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Close Battle...
Good Storeys... Didnt like How Yall Ended them tho...

Flow> OO
Topic> Cash
Emotion> OO
Imagery> OO
Originality> Cash

VOTE-> OnlyOne

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wow technically we got king sway overhere lmao...
Click on image to open in new window

... you prolly dont get that o.O

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Looks like we got a gay

but im gonna assume you probably don't get that since we all live in the dark ages. o.0

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