Posted: 27 July 2010 at 2:00pm | IP Logged Total FSOM Rates: 11 | AVG FSOM Rate: 4.27

 A couple haters I had to mention..

 Dutch Master..always talkin trash but scared to battle me

  WAX who is no longer active but checks in when he's feeling empty inside, he lost to Flash Back

  if you get offended i don't care

Time to roll Dutch out the box and spark this spliff! he cyphers "waste from da mouth" just to talk his shit, but when I say battle..the clock just ticks, like da Bitch got a new "KISS-N-STYLE" da way he LOX his lips!!!

 See Pussy! this twat just splits, you see me comin your only options dip! make ya crew hit the deck after my glock go click, no "hesitant hollows" I ain't on dat cautious tip, I'm talkin straight "Massacre"..ON DAT BOSTON SHIT!!

 WAX comes with gay scoffs, "somethin killin his chest" maybe a grave cough, IDK..but oKAY DOG! better be steel here i don't slay soft, when I "grip the Iron" its not to play golf cuz next time I'm "cuttin Fore Heads" if you ever want a FACE OFF!!!

 you better "book it" before i close this chapter! I'm exPosin Actors, "the Flash took it" so I know your stature, told this yapper I'll subtract him add those who factor, so stop front end lines that goes in back door or I'll make you "see more stars" than HOES AT RAP TOURS!!!

  I told dem bums my flowcase can beat a roll of tongues, if you showface leave you wit swollen gums, on a sure pace to get a folded lung, I go ape when I'm not holdin gunz so I gave em both shots.. five straight without a HOLE-N-ONE!!

FEED-N-RATE!!

Posted: 28 July 2010 at 3:11am | IP Logged

WAX comes with gay scoffs, "somethin killin his chest" maybe a grave cough, IDK..but oKAY DOG! better be steel here i don't slay soft, when I "grip the Iron" its not to play golf cuz next time I'm "cuttin Fore Heads" if you ever want a FACE OFF!!!

^ shits ill mah dude. nice drop.

Posted: 29 July 2010 at 1:53pm | IP Logged

Alright um.... Nice Verse lol

-Rated-

Posted: 29 July 2010 at 8:52pm | IP Logged

Damn good rip main agreed wit Delmon!!!!

Posted: 05 August 2010 at 12:25pm | IP Logged

Some good thngs and some bad things there.
A good verse if this was a gang fight, but since it aint 'you really said nothing.
Don't get me wrong, you got mad skill but you talked about too much shooting your gun and shit.
You're on a computer talkin shit to some guy who is probably on the other side of the world..........you aint shooting nobody.
Therefore you should have attacked their skill and their weaknesses, not shoot em alll up from your PC.
I think alot of people who rap about the guns and all that shit need to remember:
This shit is text battling, not gangbanging.

Overall:
Nice wordplay with the 'still' and 'steel' line and you had a few more, nice multis and rhyming scheme, good structure though I thought that you should have broken your bars down with 2 lines each.
Bad concept because of all of the unrealistic gun play shit

Posted: 15 August 2010 at 4:03pm | IP Logged

this is some piff shit.

rated

Posted: 15 August 2010 at 5:29pm | IP Logged

don't worry Pete we gonna lay one down soon..I just had to get some stuff off my chest real quick.

listen Big Game i realize we're on the internet..i'm not a dumb motherfucker..when i write i just spit whatever i feel...most of the time its aggression..and you don't know what the fuck i will do, have done, or won't d

so stfu.. battle me and I'll pistolwhip the shit out of you!!

Posted: 15 August 2010 at 5:45pm | IP Logged

BUAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!